Here is a link to my fifth assignment:
I had my last tutorial today for my Body of Work course. We looked through my images together. My tutor felt I had done a good job in bringing my work together. I changed the text following the last tutorial, I have changed the font and made it larger in comparison to the images. My tutor said the text now looks right and without it’s own agenda and it’s not imposing judgement. My tutor recommended changing the colour of the text from black to around 80% grey. My tutor talked about a blue cast to my images, reminiciant of old postcards that fade in the sun, and maybe there is an acronyms here. I will need to make clear whether this was conscious decision and explain my reasoning.
We talked about my intentions for presenting my work, I thought maybe as a large print, or in a book or a newsletter, similar to a church newsletter. My tutor and I agree that the newsletter format would be more appropriate for my work. It would be a good base for disseminating my work. My tutor said it was a brilliant idea. She suggested I tried some out and print them. To show these on my websites, I should create a video to show the pages.
My tutor read my introduction and said it was terrific. There are a few words to change here and there. I spoke about my title. My tutor said the title was fine, but I need to give the viewer some background into my introduction. I also need to start my introduction with talking out the pilgrimage.
I need to Write a reflection of my work. This will be an important aspect. Here I will discuss my work and my research. My research has helped me develop my work, I will show how my research has influenced me in my reflection. I will also explain how I have met the assessment outlines. My tutor said my work is simple yet complex, which is a hard thing to do.
Here is my feedback form that I have filled in, with additional comments from my tutor:
Responding to the Feedback
Following my final feedback with my tutor, I am happy with how my work has turned out. I am going to print out my images in a newsletter format and I will change a few words in my introduction.
Georgina's Body of Work 
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